Dear Columnist,

[Leave the seating at the oden restaurant to us]
The other day, Flag Maker took on the role of heel and gave a shout out to the male column team.It's a job that Joe with a good appearance can't do.First of all, I would like to express my deepest gratitude not only for being a heel, but at least for representing Joe's feelings.I would like to express how grateful I am to the flag maker. Thank you so much.thank you very much.

[Please feel free to make suggestions]
That said, there are some points where I disagree with Mr. Flag Maker.Joe reads those columns to the end while saying "boring @!", and sometimes rereads them.This is probably because those columns are the roads you have traveled, are currently taking, or may take.It's boring, but it's because I sympathize with him in a broad sense, saying, "I'm like him," or "I'm like that, too."And while rereading a number of columns, I noticed something.That is, even if you don't find each column interesting, if you read the whole series at once (although I think it's a bit too much as a recent trend), it can become a single story.There is no hesitation in saying that it is not bad and that it is interesting.However, when I look at his rum one by one, my honest impression is that his perspective is a little narrow, and he doesn't have much ingenuity in his expressions.In short, Joe's modest wish is to write from the point of view of the reader.Therefore, I would like to make some suggestions for writing this column.
[Who do you think I am!?]
 I am sure that many of the readers who have read this far have thought, "Do you have such qualifications and abilities!"
vinegar.From the conclusion, Joe's answer is "There is that."The basis (reason?) is 2 points for him. 1 Joe is believed to be the oldest writer in this column
2 Be a writer endorsed by Mr. Kida
1 and 2 are outlined.
Joe joined Universe in 2017.There was already a column column at that time, but all the columns at that time were written by the club staff.At the same time, we were recruiting external column writers under the name of Representative Kida.I don't think he had an outside columnist at that point.So Joe applied to be a column writer for his memoir.I immediately received a reply from Mr. Kida, asking me to send him a draft. Until his third column, I had to send manuscripts to Mr. Kida and get a reply.In other words, it seems that the first outside writer was Joe (first article was written by him on October 3, 2017).I would like to introduce an email that I received in advance with the representative's endorsement (excerpt). <I am thrilled with this wonderfully realistic post.It was a really interesting and real article that allowed him to experience the excitement of a date just like himself.>
<The content of what you wrote is just offensive to the club.If this is the case, the reader will think, "What, is this a compliment between relatives?"If possible, could you add more content, criticism, or skepticism about the club? ”, I think that you will naturally want to read the latter. (snip) That said, it's still a great article.I really want to read more.I am sure many readers will agree with this article.
I quoted a little longer because I thought I could understand the stance of representative Kida's column at that time.And no matter who says he is, Joe is the first external columnist to be endorsed by President Kida (I think he is).

[Proposal 1 Let's pay attention to women's clothing]

I was able to confirm that I am qualified to make a proposal to Joe (bitter smile), so I will make a proposal immediately.Including Joe's column, I don't think there are many column writers who write in detail about the other woman, even if they write about their impressions of women and changes in their feelings.As a result, it tends to be an "old man's confession of feelings".There is also a "confession of feelings" that is worth reading, but in general I have the impression that the expressions are flat and that there is not enough depth.Of course, the woman's anonymity must be guaranteed, so her appearance and profile may be written in a restrained manner.However, even though this column is written from a male point of view, the main character is a woman.You want to express the other woman three-dimensionally while paying attention to anonymity.As a proposal for that, I would like to first propose, "Let's focus on what women wear on a date, and write about it in detail and in your own words."The key points are "in detail" and "in your own words". I'm sure you'll hear someone say, "What's the need for her?"
[Model for Proposal 1]
<Situation>
・ Characters: Joe, Satsuki (married), Rumi Harumi (married)
・Location: Japanese restaurant near Ginkakuji
・Other notes (laughs) Mr. Rumi Harumi and Satsuki are teachers of the tea ceremony that Joe is learning.Rumi Harumi and Satsuki are dating. experienced lesbians).On the other hand, Joe and Satsuki are officially dating.

　Even now, I think I could have turned down Harumi-sensei's invitation.Uncharacteristically nervous, Joe arrived at the store twenty minutes before opening.Already in front of the store, he was waiting for several pairs of elegant women of a good age to hang a noren in front of the store.According to Rumi Harumi's instructions, Joe wears a suit made by a tailor who is a regular customer of a certain former Prime Minister (his shirt has blue stripes made at the same store. I'm not sure, but I don't have a tie).The owner of the tailor told me, ``Don't put anything in your pockets when you wear this suit because it will lose its shape. not necessarily protected).He only has one pair of shoes, John Lobb.Of course, I also carefully polished it last night.I thought I would stop if it rained, but fortunately today is a refreshing autumn day.However, compared to the day before, the temperature was 20°C lower than the day before.Joe unintentionally raises the collar of his coat.If you look around, you can see that the autumn leaves have progressed at once.And 1 minutes before he pulls up a black Century in front of the store.Saito, the driver, quickly got out of the car and opened the back seat door, and the two of them got out of the car or him.First, Harumi-sensei, followed by Satsuki.Then, not only Joe, but also the ladies waiting for the store to open all looked at the two of them at once.It wasn't just because they were in kimono.In fact, some of the ladies were wearing kimonos.The reason everyone's gaze was focused on the two was because their appearance was overwhelmingly gorgeous, and because the area around them was shining as if a spotlight had hit them.Moreover, the kimono itself is monochromatic. (Now that I think about it, the spotlight might have actually been on. Rumi Harumi would have done something like that.)
　The kimonos worn by the two men were plain colors and lined with one crest, so they weren't very flashy, but if you look closely, you can see the individuality of the two people in the obi and obi tie. It brought out the charm.Ha Rumi-sensei's kimono was an elegant Nishijin dyed fabric with a light purple color on the ground where the paulownia bamboo and phoenix arabesque pattern faintly emerged.The double obi is made by weaving autumn leaves of different colors into a cream fabric, and it is combined with the red obi.Both of them expressed the sense of the seasons with Harumi's unique sense of color, and the delicacy of designing down to the smallest detail made Joe groan.Harumi-sensei isn't as flashy as Satsuki, but Joe thinks that she looks like a white man wearing a kimono. It not only enhances your beauty, but also makes you realize that that beauty is typical of Japanese women.On the other hand, Satsuki was also dyed in Nishijin, but the background pattern of the rice ears is dyed in a bright, slightly darker light blue, further enhancing the fresh beauty of Satsuki that does not make you feel her age.The fukuro obi is black with autumn leaves of different sizes and colors.The obidome is the color of unohana, which matches the black background of the fukuro obi.Joe had thought that Satsuki was a western beauty with more flamboyant features than Rumi Harumi, but the kimono made him realize that Satsuki's inherent beauty was her Japanese modesty.However, Satsuki's modesty is more sensual than anyone else, and he was.In any case, there is no doubt that the two are having a detailed discussion about the kimono they will be wearing today, and it is not just a simple meeting, but a sensual demonstration of their closeness.After all, the two are lovers.
"Joe, are you waiting for me?"

 "No, I just came."

"Also, the costume is good for horses, and the suit suits you very well. But it's not okay to wear no tie. I'm sure the shoes were polished last night, but there's unevenness. Then Rob will cry. My husband has a hobby of shining shoes, so I'd like to learn it next time."　

　Harumi-sensei is the one who doesn't stop at just praising her.Behind her, Satsuki was smiling without saying anything.
Soon after, the door of the shop opens and the curtain hangs.Customers pass through the noren one after another as if they were waiting.We were the last.Joe, who was in front of the three, stopped in front of the curtain and urged them to enter first.As always, Harumi-sensei went first, followed by Satsuki.And when Satsuki passes by Joe, the sleeve of her kimono touches Joe's bare hand for a moment.Then I realized that a strong stimulation that she had never experienced was transmitted to my crotch.Even though the doping is his, and he's usually not very responsive, this momentary event, the touch of his bare hand on the sleeve, makes Joe stiffen violently.Until then, Joe had thought that "rubbing" was just a metaphor, but he didn't.Joe fantasized about the dizzying world of Harumi and Satsuki that would unfold after the meal, and he clearly realized that he was now grinning with a vulgar grin.
[Recommendation 2 Would you like to open the comment section?]
"Column Daring" is basically written based on your own experience.It's only natural, of course, but sometimes we tend to be short-sighted when our experiences are too strong.In order to avoid it, I made suggestion 1.In addition, I think that the column will be three-dimensional and interesting if you mix in the place you dated, the atmosphere of the store, and the episode with the clerk.Also, Joe has never written this, but it might be interesting to try to write it by pretending to be the other woman.
However, the above is not easy, and it may not be possible to implement it immediately.Therefore, I would like to propose that "he opens the comment section".By doing so, I think I can capture the point of view of the reader. There may be writers who say, "I don't have a girlfriend who has been told this and that by others" or "I can't respond because I don't have time."I'm assuming it's a girlfriend who understands comfortably (in Joe's case, I have time, so I can't make excuses that I can't handle it).However, even if it is a small amount, as long as the manuscript fee is generated, Joe now thinks that it is the writer's duty to receive criticism from readers in a broad sense (he once closed the comment section). ).I'm sure your thoughts will vary, but I would appreciate it if you would take Joe's ideas into consideration and reconsider.Please consider it.